Knot, Another Rose Bush Poem by Nika McGuin

Knot, Another Rose Bush

Rating: 3.2


My jade plant has long since lost
the red tips at the end of her leaves.
She no longer tries to resemble rose petals.
Instead, jade holds her succulent head high
facing the sun, just like any other plant.
She has grown well in this Louisiana weather.

My Hair too stopped trying to be like others, 'tis such bosh.
This mane is of a different strand than that which requires not
such preparation as twisting, and detangling before each wash.
For them hair flows unshrinkingly in the shower, with few knots.

I wanted to try it once, I thought I'd feel freed.
instead unraveling became a bothersome affair
because my own common sense I failed to heed.
Nor did I bear in mind, the needs of my own hair.

Lady jade is not like the celebrated rose bush,
but in every respect she is just as lovely.
These coils are like my people - of the Kingdom Kush.
Thus, they are not straight, and need not ever be.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: The Kingdom of Kush or Kush was an ancient African kingdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 02 May 2014

This is a wonderful poem of self-discovery. It shows the actual progress almost moment to moment to the realization THIS IS ME! NOT THAT OTHER IMAGE I WAS IMITATING! I like the way the jade plant frames your self-discovery, because it make the REALYOU who is fully present at the end of the poem as natural and inevitable as the plant. And at the very end we get a glimmer of the majestic world of KUSH, which lives on in you.

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James Mclain 27 February 2014

Better to know in youth the power of truth. The journey's to long I chased the illusion of song. School and the hearth, soft the heart. Please be appeased there I dwell....iip

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