She could feel his eyeson the nape of her neckShe could hear himbarely breathingAnd wondered if one canhear a heartAnd a soul singing
Great poem. Intent comes across clear.
Very well done and said Sonya. I was barely breathing as i read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
beautiful feel.beautiful touch. nice poem.voted10
It's gorgeous - you can feel the air rise on the back of your neck. Beautifully done
A beautiful expression of an intimate moment. You leave open the question of whether he is aware that she is aware of him. Nicely done.
this beautiful indeed, , , i loved this lines....
very moving and passionate write friend! ! !
with lots of lv
Two bodies but one soul. A state of realization and bliss. Penned with masterly skill.
And so you ask can one hear a heart and
soul singing? The answer is YES! For in
your words I can clearly hear your heart
and soul. Ahhhhh, what a beautiful song
that you do sing.
Intimacy penned sweetly and concisely. Beautiful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
So many emotions stirred in so few words - wonderful stuff! S :)
When bodies and souls become one, all inner feelings become
vocal. A very romantic piece of write, Sonya.
This is so very sweet..lovely....
Ah, it's good to be back, discovering the best new work on poemhunter! Nice one Sonya...I can feel the atmosphere...
Very romantic. Two souls in tune.
May the music never end.10/10.
Always your friend,
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