Mihaela Pirjol


Labels (Senryu) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

"Where are you from? " made
to divide The Sacred Whole —
we're not a label!

Topic(s) of this poem: society

Form: Senryu


Comments about Labels (Senryu) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Terry Craddock (11/19/2015 4:22:00 PM)


    Do Cosmic Labels Define A Sacred Whole?

    intriguing
    the question
    the contrast

    with cosmic division
    with The Sacred Whole
    where none are labels

    but essence
    quantified
    rendered

    into meaning
    weighed balanced
    on a divine scale


    Copyright © Terence George Craddock
    Inspired by the poem 'Labels' by Mihaela Pirjol.
    Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.
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  • Terry Craddock (11/18/2015 7:27:00 AM)


    intriguing, the question, the contrast with division with The Sacred Whole, where none are labels, but essence quantified, rendered into meaning weighed balanced on a divine scale (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (11/14/2015 2:34:00 AM)


    All said in a senryu. Profound and thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/8/2015 11:11:00 AM)


    Outstanding Senryu.......Philosophical undertone in it.10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 26, 2017


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