Pirate Love Magic Man

Rookie (2/13/71 / VIRGINIA)

Laces - Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

One late spring day me and Pops went camping,
Just around dark we heard some clanging and banging,
Pops looked to see what the noise was out there,
In a whisper he said 'It's a big brown bear',
Then he easly unzipped the flapps so out them we can crews,
He glanced back and I was tieing the laces on my running shoes,
He asked so you think your going to out run that big bear,
o' that will never do,
I siad nope all I have to do is out run you.


Comments about Laces by Pirate Love Magic Man

  • (4/1/2015 9:12:00 PM)


    Quiet humor! Especially enjoyed the surprise ending! Great poem! Sign of a great humorous poem is making people laugh out loud! I definitely did, couldn't hold the laughter in! Fantastic poem! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • (4/1/2015 9:08:00 PM)


    Quietly humorous, surprise ending! A great poem! Absolutely made me laugh out loud! A sign of a really good poem with humor - making people laugh! Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • (12/17/2009 11:40:00 PM)


    haha...
    awsome write.....
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  • (12/16/2009 9:50:00 PM)


    lol
    i hear that! !
    thats cute.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 16, 2009



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