Life Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Life

Rating: 5.0


You're right life will never be but one thing,
That is what is at both ends of the string,
You and yourself fighting for sudden death.

Tuesday, December 16, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 29 December 2008

this is truly amazing my friend! I love it! ! ! such a cool concept. life being a string very cool I would have never thought of it. but that is what makes you so neat. good job. Purkey

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 December 2008

Life is stretched at both ends of the string. Walking on this string is always a risk of sudden death but we have to walk on it. There is no other option.

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Tyease Collins 22 December 2008

Such a short poem but the words are so strong. Good Job Steve <3 -Tess C.

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