Lacrimosa Poem by Valerie Dohren

Lacrimosa

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I saw the teardrops in their eyes
Which filled my saddened heart with pain
I pray sweet children, through all time,
Such tears I ne`er shall see again

For I would set the world at rest
If such was ever in my reach
That peace would surely be the way
To bring true love and joy to each

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I saw the teardrops on your face
This life has thought to make you weep
So now, my dearest, close on you
A vigil I shall ever keep

To mend and thus to ease your pain
And so caress your weary mind
Shall be my lifelong wish for you -
Together as with all mankind

3
I felt the teardrops on my lips
Their salted taste my heart despaired
As witnessed I those fettered souls
Set on this earth, so full ensnared

O that I could become the balm
To soothe all those yet grieving so
And bring sweet solace to each one
That happiness is all they know

4
Then as towards the heav`ns I gazed
The tears of angels glistened high
Upon the stars, as night-time`s glow
Against the darkened moonlit sky

All heaven`s complement did weep
So wretch`ed was their sad lament
For all the heartache of the world
Which ever brought such discontent

(Too many tears each one has wept
Too many hearts are lost and torn
Too many souls in sorrow deep -
May all in gladness be reborn)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 August 2012

Ah, my latin is almost as poor as my French, and gaelic thgese days...however, if my foreign lingual memory serves me semi-correctly...I believe your title en anglais is, 'Weeping'...And the accompanying work is Primo Simpatico, young lass! And I concur with my buddy, Bob, below, as this is my kind of poetry as well! ~FjR~

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Kevin Halls 12 August 2012

Just read all your latest poems Val and they just get better and better. If the Olympics had poetry as an event you would be getting Gold medals galore! Keep them coming.

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Robert Wynn 11 August 2012

My kinda reading here, so sweet

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Captain Cur 10 August 2012

This poem slowly built with each sensitive well crafted verse to a spectacular uplifting ending. Great write, enjoyed reading this very much. You are one of a kind, Val.

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Valsa George 09 August 2012

Val, what an ardent prayer! ! As usual another treat! ! !

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Meena Mustafa 07 May 2015

Such a beautiful poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing :)

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Mary Forrester 04 March 2013

Such a beautiful poem Valerie

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 August 2012

Beautifully clever.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 August 2012

a good poem on pain and tears, but why do the angels have the tears and these tears are visualized as the stars.. Universe, full of tears! feel very sad when reading this poem!

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Danny Draper 14 August 2012

A beautiful piece and so much sadness well considered and heartfelt. We like this poem, live in hope.

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