Last Breath Comments

suicide, when it is an extreme and 'high' act of free will, has to be respected. Unfortunately, a good deal of people try it just to escape the burden of the world.. then, there are also those who use suicide as a weapon to kill other human beings, even believing to reach - through such an act of pure violence - a faboulous ''paradise'' filled of virgins.. but that it another 'story'..

Suicide is a coward way out. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. A good poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Laurie. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

It's a brilliant effort. Thanks for sharing.

Aside from the typos listed below, this was a well thought out poem, Laurie

Good poem, not that I agreed entirely. May I point out that I surmise that in the third to last verse, you may have meant ‘cheek' instead of 'check', and perhaps in the last line of the third verse you may have meant to say 'beyond past repair'. Or not, just an observation. Adeline