Latent Leaving Poem by Smoky Hoss

Latent Leaving

Rating: 5.0


Life touches both shores
That lap at the isthmus of living;
Water before
Water after
Water evermore -
We walk
The penninsula of life
From one end to the other
Afraid of getting wet,
Never realizing how much we'd love to swim -
Yet at the very end
We shall all wade in
Discovering the deeper we go...
We become the water,
We are the flow -
Turning with one last gaze before we part
We reach out to the sandy shore
Writing 'Goodbye' upon the beach of time,
Forever there, next to the name
We leave behind -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 19 July 2012

A fantastic description of a journey through life, `Writing Goodbye on the beach of time` a wonderful poem..

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2012

Brilliant poem Smoky, wise and wonderful words.

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Juan Olivarez 18 July 2012

Smoky this is one deep poem, we all will take the plunge one day it is so written great poem.

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Eric Cockrell 17 July 2012

and the new name we find.... absolutely love this one!

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