Leave Me And Save Me From Falling Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Leave Me And Save Me From Falling

Rating: 4.5


Leave me
and save me from falling
save me from you
For the world
has so much more to offer
than time spend with you
For without you
there will be no obstacles to cross
and doors will be unlocked
at all times
For without you
life is feeling free from suppression
therefore your presence
is no longer needed
or necessary
to feel comfortable and relaxed
For without you
my future can breath in peace
in and out
on the rhythm of happy vibes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 10 March 2018

There is a time when slavery in love looks everything, again there is a time when one desires freedom from this slavery. Human feelings nicely painted.

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Nudershada Cabanes 09 March 2018

A love that thrives on suppression is not love. Let love free you from its shackle and find your happiness elsewhere. An enlightening poem.10

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Lyn Paul 09 March 2018

May you find your Happy Vibes The wrong person can restrict you from being just who you are and what you want to be. Life is too short.

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Rini Shibu 09 March 2018

Well penned about one's freedom Mario..love sometime suffocated by lot of restrictions

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