Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken

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My Hand - Poem by Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken

I offer you my hand
straight from the heart

A hand of surrender
to my feelings for you

A hand that always
will protect you

A hand that'll go
through fire for you

But it is also a hand
that's terrified
that your hand will let go

Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain


Comments about My Hand by Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/17/2018 4:22:00 PM)


    Faith verses fair is here composed in a creative and compelling composition! (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (4/14/2018 11:30:00 PM)


    A sincere offer with a fear that it may not be accepted. Feelings of fear and frustration nicely painted. (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Reed (9/12/2017 4:30:00 AM)


    That is the risk we take in loving. Nice poem, Mario (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/11/2017 2:07:00 PM)


    When love becomes deep and true, for help the hand stretches from heart. It can be able to protect any one whom one loves. Beautiful poem nicely presented. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/8/2017 4:16:00 AM)


    Such a heart-felt poem! Honesty throughout. And even greater honesty at the end! Very well written, Mario. (Report) Reply

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  • Doris Cornago (9/2/2017 1:34:00 AM)


    Simple and straightforward, I love the honest feelings, Mario. Tell me why you have 3 names, if you please and it's not too personal. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (7/31/2017 6:59:00 AM)


    ANOTHER NEWEST NOTE: That poem is found back. Thank you all for your attention and the most for the Poet himself, Dankjewel, groetjes, Sylvia Frances Chan (Report) Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (7/31/2017 6:44:00 AM)


    This is a smartest poem, BUT few would be aware of it, sure, read the last line and THINK. Thank you so much for this most beautiful and meaningful poem of LIFE. With the very best wishes, Sylvia Frances Chan, poetess, evangelist and world traveler. God´s Blessings in Abundance. NOTE: my comment for FORBIDDEN FRUIT was not placed, reason unknown. That was a very important response upon the poem, it looked like GOD did not wish that. (Report) Reply

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  • Jr Cuyam (3/30/2016 11:53:00 PM)


    I like to have that kind of hand :) nicely done! (Report) Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (10/15/2015 2:56:00 PM)


    Your poems ae full of love, because they are dedicated and written with care about that YOU whom you love so much! (Report) Reply

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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (3/6/2015 4:47:00 AM)


    Wonderful hand that always comes up. Nicely presented poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/6/2015 4:33:00 AM)


    Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    E.K.L.     (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 6, 2015

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