Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken

My Hand

Rating: 5.0
I offer you my hand
straight from the heart

A hand of surrender
to my feelings for you

A hand that always
will protect you

A hand that'll go
through fire for you

But it is also a hand
that's terrified
that your hand will let go
Friday, March 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
Navod Dilhara 05 February 2020
Simple and fascinating.A great piece of work.
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A B Faniki 05 October 2019
Beautiful simply beautiful. A creative and heartwarming piece. Thanks for sharing such great write
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Adeeb Alfateh 16 July 2019
A hand that always will protect you A hand that'll go through fire for you beautiful expression beautiful 10+++++++++++
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Mahtab Bangalee 10 October 2018
its always good and great humanitarian hand - great poem
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Britte Ninad 29 May 2018
an offering with joy and sorrow nice 10+++
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Faith verses fair is here composed in a creative and compelling composition!
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Akhtar Jawad 14 April 2018
A sincere offer with a fear that it may not be accepted. Feelings of fear and frustration nicely painted.
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Paul Reed 12 September 2017
That is the risk we take in loving. Nice poem, Mario
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2017
When love becomes deep and true, for help the hand stretches from heart. It can be able to protect any one whom one loves. Beautiful poem nicely presented.
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Richard Wlodarski 08 September 2017
Such a heart-felt poem! Honesty throughout. And even greater honesty at the end! Very well written, Mario.
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