Dave Alan Walker

Gold Star - 4,826 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Leave Us - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As our hearts break
and the rainbow falls
all we have is memories

Memories of a life
and a world
that used to be for us
Now it's for them

Them who
start wars and break lives
For them who sell drugs
For them who just don't care
about us

For them I just say
It's our world, leave us

Comments about Leave Us by Dave Alan Walker

  • Briana Knight (4/16/2012 5:47:00 PM)

    WOW. COOL i love it. i want more plz hehehe (Report) Reply

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  • (4/12/2012 7:49:00 AM)

    Drug pushing is a real issue in all countries, to the poor countries, it is a source of income, but for everyone including those countries, it is a contagious disease. Let us stand against this evil! Good Dave.. (Report) Reply

  • (4/11/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    Great message you're trying to portray. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (4/10/2012 2:30:00 PM)

    If only they would, but I don't think it is our world any more. But we can create our own and hope that one day it will become big enough to embrace all. (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    there are those that care, and those that dont... only the caring really live! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/10/2012 7:44:00 AM)

    Very good poem dave my friend. Congratulation. I like it.
    Please read me.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 10, 2012

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