لمبی رات Lengthy Nights Poem by Akhtar Jawad

لمبی رات Lengthy Nights

Rating: 5.0

گانے بھی سنے افسانے سنے بس اب کوئی خاموش رہے
اب ایسا بھی ہو کہ نیند آئے اور لمبی کالی رات کٹے
بادل پیار کا ایسے اٹھے جو مجھ سے چرا لے میرا وجود
چینی کی طرح میں گُھل جاؤں کوئی اب اتنا کھل کر برسے

Akhtar! I listened to your songs I listened to your tale
Lengthy is the black night and now tired is the gale
Can't you be nice to rain like the black clouds?
Dissolve me like a solvent before the solute is stale.
Sweetheart! Still the sugar hasn't lost its sweetness
Make a drink for me to reduce the life's bitterness.

لمبی رات Lengthy Nights
Tuesday, May 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 May 2018

Oh! What a lovely poem it is, where sweet heart is. Let me quote...... Sweetheart! Still the sugar hasn't lost its sweetness Make a drink for me to reduce the life's bitterness. Fantastic Akatar ji. Apne kamal kia.

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Khalida Bano Ali 02 May 2018

A beautiful poem, you wrote more in four lines of Urdu than six lines of English. That's natural, Urdu is your mother tongue.

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Khalid Saifullah 04 May 2019

A lovely short poem, very impressive.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2018

Revisiting this poem values more.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 May 2018

The lengthy black deep night has kept emotion for sweetheart. We have listened to your tale of love carefully and night is dazzling with light of stars. An amazing poem is wonderfully penned...10

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A sweet and lovely poem that will melt one's heart. What a magical night has been depicted in this great poem. Enjoyed reading it.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2018

Dissolve me like a solvent before the solute is stale. Sweetheart! Still the sugar hasn't lost its sweetness Make a drink for me to reduce the life's bitterness.....I love the poetic expression! A beautiful poem (10)

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