گانے بھی سنے افسانے سنے بس اب کوئی خاموش رہے
اب ایسا بھی ہو کہ نیند آئے اور لمبی کالی رات کٹے
بادل پیار کا ایسے اٹھے جو مجھ سے چرا لے میرا وجود
چینی کی طرح میں گُھل جاؤں کوئی اب اتنا کھل کر برسے
Akhtar! I listened to your songs I listened to your tale
Lengthy is the black night and now tired is the gale
Can't you be nice to rain like the black clouds?
Dissolve me like a solvent before the solute is stale.
Sweetheart! Still the sugar hasn't lost its sweetness
Make a drink for me to reduce the life's bitterness.
A beautiful poem, you wrote more in four lines of Urdu than six lines of English. That's natural, Urdu is your mother tongue.
The lengthy black deep night has kept emotion for sweetheart. We have listened to your tale of love carefully and night is dazzling with light of stars. An amazing poem is wonderfully penned...10
A sweet and lovely poem that will melt one's heart. What a magical night has been depicted in this great poem. Enjoyed reading it.10
Dissolve me like a solvent before the solute is stale. Sweetheart! Still the sugar hasn't lost its sweetness Make a drink for me to reduce the life's bitterness.....I love the poetic expression! A beautiful poem (10)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh! What a lovely poem it is, where sweet heart is. Let me quote...... Sweetheart! Still the sugar hasn't lost its sweetness Make a drink for me to reduce the life's bitterness. Fantastic Akatar ji. Apne kamal kia.