Lesson Poem by Patrice James

Lesson

Rating: 5.0


I learned my lesson wisely,
a Blessing I'll never forget.
It'll stay with me forever,
It's beware of give to get.

The thing I'll do the most,
when kingdom is ready and set.
Is give and give some more,
I'll beware of give to get.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 14 February 2008

Hi Patrice! Nice poem, short but to the point! A pleasure to read! ! ! *10*! ! ! Best rgards , Friend Thad

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Howard Johnson 14 February 2008

I like the Rhymining, And the word selection, Excellent last line 'thought', With a meaning to all of us, ,

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Melvin Banggollay 03 February 2008

Nice piece brother with very good rhythm. True, let us learn from every downfall to share our life for others. thanks, melvin

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