Deep Within My Heart Poem by Patrice James

Deep Within My Heart

Rating: 5.0


Loving you has filled my heart.
with joy beyond compare.
Nothing has meant more to me
than knowing that you care.
And deep within my heart I know,
That through the future,
I'll find my greatest happiness
In sharing life with you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philip Housiaux 19 April 2008

A most worthwhile little piece - good word control used to express one important thing most powerfully. Makes us all want to have be in such a love

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Jing Jing 23 February 2008

i just love this one short but very straight thru the heart

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 February 2008

Hello Patrice: Well, I guess we meet again. I had to comment on this poem. Really, well, whatever it is, it's the best I've ever read at saying what it says. So it really doesn't matter what you call it. My guess is, everyone in the world ought to keep a copy of this or memorize it. We should teach it to our children in grade school, so everyone is able to say, 'I Love You'. Greenwolfe 1962

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Thad Wilk 08 November 2007

Hi Patrice! Love this poem! Keep em coming! (10) ! ! ! ! Thad

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Ray Lucero 08 November 2007

Patrice, Nice write. Wedding vows? Peace, Ray

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