Now, I feel low
Among all those who can do more.
I still tried but couldn't beat them all.
I cried, cried till I saw the rising dawn
In my life, whose lessons can teach anyone.
And now,
I feel I can take on them all
For now and for all.
Let it flow
Let it flow
Let your skills not to go waste anymore.
I know,
My enemies can do much more
But my dawn, it cannot be stopped from rising anymore.
Let it flow,
Let it flow,
Let my dawn rise more and more.
Let the victor move on,
And remember,
That the-
The victor is me.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing Vaibhav.
Let it flow Let it flow Let your skills not to go waste anymore. I know, My enemies can do much more But my dawn, it cannot be stopped from rising anymore. very fine expressions which are very very positive.. the reader is affected by your words. tony
This is indeed a wonderful poem devoted to success in life through efforts backed by self confidence. I know.... My enemies can do much more But my dawn, it cannot be stopped from rising anymore.
Such a beautiful and inspiring song, Vaibhav...10++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
" Let your skills not to go waste anymore." " ...go to waste...." Not bad. 'Tis good to have confidence in oneself, but i would not emphasize 'beating' aka 'winning against' others, or being 'the victor.' Do as best as you can for yourself & others in life, and try to be satisfied. I'll copy & paste poem to you as a message, with additional comments. bri :)