Friday, May 15, 2015

Let It Go.... The Great Debate Comments

Rating: 5.0

EWWWWW.......
I SMELL SOMETHING, WAS THAT YOU?
IT SMELLS DISGUSTING, ON THE BORDERLINE TO POOH!
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Lyn Paul
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Bri Edwards 19 August 2019

Gee, the last comment from me had some unfinished stuff at the end; i had started a poem but stopped. it was my error to send that 'stuff''. ha ha. bri :) hey, i just passed gas!

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2019

stanza 6: maybe a couple of typos? but I'm loving the poem so fa! to MyPoemList. OOPS! pardon me. i hope you didn't smell that. As i learned years ago, it is best to 'let loose' when a dog in nearby; one can blame the canine! Don't Bend Over, Lyn! I wonder if Helen Reddy ever 'let one rip' while at her microphone. bri :) bri :) Remember, dear, I too am in the room with you, so please don't make it smell like a zoo. I KNOW Helen Reddy

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 April 2016

Nice piece of work! We were born and, we came and met this system on earth. Infact! In some countries, women are not respected at all. I still ask myself many questions all the time. Why is it so? Can this attitude really change? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Hazel Durham 24 May 2015

Really funny and so true men can get away with anything but women are judged all the time so I suspose the best thing to do if you can't beat them join them LOL! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 May 2015

Interesting write, laughed a lot. Enjoyed reading the flow of words......Something different from your usual write. Smiles! !

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Kelly Kurt 15 May 2015

As the father of 4 daughters, I would like to think that there will be a day when they can fart with the best of men and not be thought any less of because of their gender.: -) Nice write, Lyn

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