Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 103,298 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Let Me Test Am I Alive - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Please don't ignore.
You are looking in pains,
I see tears in your eyes,
Your face is red with strains!
Share your pains with me,
Relieve the strains with me.
No, neither I love you,
nor I want to help you,
I just want to test myself.
Share your story with me,
I know you have a tearful story,
let it cut my heart into so many pieces,
let it melt the pieces into hot white blood,
let me see whether my eyes bleed for you,
or not,
you are an stranger to me,
I don't know as to who are you,
if I cry for you, I am alive,
otherwise I am dead,
Let me test, am I alive!

Topic(s) of this poem: stranger


Comments about Let Me Test Am I Alive by Akhtar Jawad

  • Musawir Raakh (11/19/2015 1:16:00 PM)


    Yes, you are alive, until you keep on writing wonderfully, (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (11/19/2015 12:29:00 PM)


    To empathize with another's plight is proof of life.
    Thanks, Akhtar
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  • (11/18/2015 11:04:00 PM)


    Really amazing poem........................................................10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/18/2015 1:24:00 PM)


    Very fantastic expression brings emotion in mind of many. Sharing this tearful story is definitely thought provoking. Amazing to have test of living mood of life. Wise sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/18/2015 8:48:00 AM)


    let it cut my heart into so many pieces,
    let it melt the pieces into hot white blood,
    let me see whether my eyes bleed for you,
    or not,
    Nicely written poem, ...Janab, Amusing 10+++
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2015



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