Ravi Sathasivam

Let My Country Awake.............. - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

When the mind is set without fear
When the word speaks without lie
When the heart is free from dirt
When the knowledge earns without waste
When the hatredness dies without curse
When the love lives without trouble
When the freedom showers without crush
When the nature hugs without anger
When the heaven throws its blessing without limit
When the silent march forward to the freedom
Let my country awake.

Comments about Let My Country Awake.............. by Ravi Sathasivam

  • (11/28/2018 5:35:00 PM)

    This poem is by the one, the only, Rabindranath Tagore. (Report) Reply

    (11/28/2018 5:38:00 PM)

    I should have said based on. I can see that you have adapted it but I think it's inspiration should be credited.

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  • (10/7/2009 5:26:00 AM)

    Good write.......well said
    10 points
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  • (9/18/2009 4:09:00 AM)

    Birds of love take to the blue skies,
    man and man gets bound in humane ties,
    truth will rise and triumph over lies,
    into such beautiful dawn of freedom.....let ur country awake! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • (9/17/2009 11:42:00 AM)

    very nice poem written on a sensitive issue.
    thanks for sharing.
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  • (9/17/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    an international anthem...a wise prayer to live by...a 10+ for this univeral appeal (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2009 7:12:00 AM)

    this is a very nice poem, when i saw that you are living in sri lanka, i can imagine your poems with those people who are suffering there.. its a very sad situation that is prevailing in sri lanka.. i too wish that people get a freedom from brutal attacks.. (Report) Reply

  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (9/12/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    A very conscious poem of our current world's predicament! (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2009 5:56:00 AM)

    i like this one.... well penned.... it reminds me of a prayer we used to recite in school.... good job.... (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2009 4:54:00 AM)

    when the eyes of sleeping giant are wide open
    and the ears of mankind are close
    will there be any development?
    or terrorism will always continue...
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  • (9/12/2009 2:13:00 AM)

    vow! beautiful.it could well be your national anthem
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  • (9/8/2009 5:31:00 AM)

    wonderful abstract poem, well written, lovely to read....................10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • (7/21/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    lovely tagorian poem...an explainative extension (Report) Reply

  • premji premji (7/2/2009 12:51:00 AM)

    you are a 'tagore'an!
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  • (5/19/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    By hook or by crook we v achieved peace finally...it s time to spread love...and make this country the garden of eden where tiger and lion will work hand to hand...passionately and lovingly as ever, , , (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2004

Poem Edited: Friday, April 9, 2010

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