Friday, October 9, 2009

Let The Body Speak' Comments

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do you know
that this ancient body
longs to speak
devoid of niceties
...
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Indira Babbellapati 21 May 2010

from nikunj: this is beautiful Indira...this has finesse, this has grace and the respect for one of the most sought after desire since ages. you have used the simple words here very well...I liked....1. a boomerang hurled eons ago when we roamed the earth - nice way to put the essential elements of life...to project the innermost needs in words..2. scrawling its unique alphabet without guilt...this is divine and mystical....physics at its best, wrapped in chemistry...3. frozen darkness till then lying fossiled within............this is delicious to the poetic appetite...Indira you are a magician with words....is all I can say on let the body speak From Nikunj

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Sathyanarayana M V S 01 November 2009

Very intense, very passionate and it is so true that it is the body that matters in the end.Really ecstatic this poem. Please take a look at my poem 'Love where are you', some 34 word poem..........

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Anand Madhukar 19 October 2009

The body indeed has a language of its own which has been brilliantly versified in this write, a poem which raises sensuousness to an almost spiritual level.

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Indira Babbellapati 15 October 2009

From: Brett Ackerman (Colorado Springs United States; Male; 44) To: Indira Babbellapati Date Time: 10/13/2009 3: 10: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: let the body speak Language is the body's only true function that examines all the possibilities of your theme.....very thought provoking.

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Ranjit Ravindran 13 October 2009

'…it’s the same unsettling feeling then and now too...' I often use this expression while discussing about civilization or the so called evolution of mankind. Feels good to see it a poetic form that too penned by my beloved teacher.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 10 October 2009

well imagined; well worded; a nice write up. shan

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 October 2009

The ancient art of body talk, communication of the primal kind, we all know that language deep inside, that's where our true self resides... Andy 10

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Dr Kamran Haider 09 October 2009

devoid of niceties bereft of metaphors the only language it knows- the language of agony and ecstasy -- I must say Indira, this is a truthful write... Nude and pure... But obviously not obscene... your body and mine go beyond us as each nuance tickles us in an ecstatic joy… --- Body has surely its own language and sometimes we should let it speak freely and should put so called imposed constraints on the side... for the freedom of heart, mind and soul; the body should enjoy freedom as it requires...

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Sonya Florentino 09 October 2009

The nudists have a point in wanting to live life without the hindrance of clothes but we don’t have to forgo clothing to lead more authentic lives…we simply have to get in touch with ourselves and present our true selves to the world and to each other….only then are we free of the burden of inauthenticity.... another great write Indira! !

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Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

I think the longest and the loneliest journey is the one to find self. You have taken that voyage of discovery to another level. Bravo Indira Bravo. 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 October 2009

yeap! ----> G R E A T ! ! body is the vehicle, right! mind is the fact! 10+

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Indira Babbellapati 09 October 2009

for ms. lindbald... thnq for reading this poem of mine in its true spirit...i was using body as a vehicle to drive home the truth of living and you could catch the underlying urge to live life authentically though for a wink! thnq, once again...

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:) woohoo.. spicy.. i got the images and all well. this is truly awesome.. gave me some tingling feelings too..

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 October 2009

Ahemmm, well, Professor....i wonder what the students would think about: a) Your reciting this poem out loud to your class b) You announcing yourself as the author at the end......lol! My bet, is that they would think you were one very talented, and ''COOL'' Prof, iz' what i think, young lady! F j R

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