nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

Let The Life Flows - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Your sleepy eyes tell me something
And it could be the secret of love & sex?
Song of the river at dusk
Speak the mystery of life & death?
Roar of the ocean hides her fathomless depth?
My soul-ship drifts not knowing the destiny?
A distant star will help me to show a certain locality?
Anyhow, I must move and cannot be stagnant on the stream.
What I take away at last as my ancestors
Who carried full of emptiness?


Comments about Let The Life Flows by nimal dunuhinga

  • (5/8/2006 1:48:00 PM)


    ... with a hiint of mystery. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/8/2006 1:48:00 PM)


    A nicely flowing poem which bring upon a soft and light feeling. (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (5/6/2006 7:40:00 PM)


    'my soul ship drifts not knowing the destiny'.Beautiful description of the wandering soul in all of us. Better not to know? But sometimes I wish I knew where I was headed, so as not to lose precious time getting there!
    Wonderful poem - beautiful feeling.
    Linda
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  • (5/6/2006 1:38:00 PM)


    Praise for your beautiful poem of lyrical longing. An original mind is definately at work here.

    kind regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 6, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 6, 2006


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