Let The Life Flows Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Let The Life Flows

Rating: 5.0


Your sleepy eyes tell me something
And it could be the secret of love & sex?
Song of the river at dusk
Speak the mystery of life & death?
Roar of the ocean hides her fathomless depth?
My soul-ship drifts not knowing the destiny?
A distant star will help me to show a certain locality?
Anyhow, I must move and cannot be stagnant on the stream.
What I take away at last as my ancestors
Who carried full of emptiness?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Lukas 08 May 2006

... with a hiint of mystery.

0 0 Reply
Amanda Lukas 08 May 2006

A nicely flowing poem which bring upon a soft and light feeling.

0 0 Reply
Linda Ori 06 May 2006

'my soul ship drifts not knowing the destiny'.Beautiful description of the wandering soul in all of us. Better not to know? But sometimes I wish I knew where I was headed, so as not to lose precious time getting there! Wonderful poem - beautiful feeling. Linda

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 06 May 2006

Praise for your beautiful poem of lyrical longing. An original mind is definately at work here. kind regards, Sandra

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
Close
Error Success