Letter To My Inner Enemy Poem by God is Good

Letter To My Inner Enemy

Rating: 5.0


Where do I go from here? ...
I'm so confused as of who I am...
I don't think like me anymore...
you've took me in,
then abandoned me....
leaving me feeling like a completely different person...
I can't fake a smile anymore..
I hate the sound of laughter...
any sign of happiness,
I destroy...
I walk in a room...and darkness follows...
sending everyone to their knees....
falling to me...
somehow automatically knowing my name..
they chant....
And I'm starting to like it...
the control,
the power...
the darkness...
No, stop using me, to do your work....
go back to where you came from,
and find another victim...
I have never been happy...
but not this miserable either....
I just want me back....
Just go away...
but no, i will not beg you either...
for I have learned that that is weakness...
and never will I fall weak again....
I am stronger...
and we will see.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is a really good poem! i think a lot of people feel like u do. i did. kinda still do. great poem! keep writing!

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for some reason i like this poem, it's alot unsaid.... but there's strength in your use of words... which matches the ending... we will see. thanks for sharing

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Wildan F Rabbani 02 May 2009

relate with our selves that's what you mean, right? wonderful poem...

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

this is a thought provoking and inquisitive write!

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hmmmm... challenging what sometimes seems as the stronger you... the inner you that feels overwhelming... stop holding everything in LD.. it'll help you more than you think, trust me. you're good at putting your thoughs into words, that's enjoyable to read... +10

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