Life Poem by Mountain Man


Rating: 4.2

I've struck out in baseball.
I've struck out in love.I've struck out in the game of life.
I've made a few mistakes in my life.
A life of wonder.
A moon over me.
But another day beckons me to start again.

Tuesday, June 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
Richard Lewis 18 September 2016

Interesting take on this..

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Stella Jones 21 August 2016

One need not understand the life to live but need life to understand the living

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Gajanan Mishra 23 June 2015

struck out in the game of life, good one..

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Allotey Abossey 23 June 2015

Inspirational... If at first you don't succeed, try again... Good one there

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2020

I AM MODIFYING THIS POEMY LL...DO PARDON ME IT APPLIES TO ANOTHER CANADIEN LIKE YE I've stuck out in baseball. love. the game of life. I've made many mistakes in life. of wonder. a round beautiful moon over me. yet another day beckons me to restart again. HOPE YOU WILL RELISH MY POEM brevity mainly stuck at me LL

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 May 2017

To start again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 May 2017

I've struck out in love.I've struck out in the game of life this is a life full of wonder.... a wonderful way of looking at life and laughing at it.......... thank you dear poet. tony

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A creative composition that is rich in reality yet pregnant with positivity!

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Chinedu Dike 26 January 2017

Beautiful motivational poem, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Loppo.

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Mountain Man

Mountain Man

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