Life; A Reality Show Poem by Sajna Kailas

Life; A Reality Show

Rating: 5.0


Life is a reality show
no audition; whole world selected
selected by thee God
there is one and only judge;
the ultimate judge - God!

earth is a platform; for
our life long performance
judgement is based on the
living style and attitude
whatever it is become judged

do good, plus points obtained
do sin, minus points obtained
activities are judged at time
by one and only judge;
the ultimate judge - God!

after death, result proclaim
elimination is dangerous and
put the eliminated into hell
winners are taken into heaven
and eternity belongs to them.
Yes, life is a reality show! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 August 2011

Wow! What an impressive, spiritually touching and thought provoking poem! I truly love for its positive input! I also love its imagery and fine texture! This poem has become your stepping stone into the Poetry World! Welcome! 10+++ and keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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Merlin Thattil 11 August 2011

Hi Friend, It had been an wonderful idea to compare world to a reality show. Though first stanza resembles Shakespeare's poem, rest all stanzas were a fantastic creativity of yours. Well done.

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Dave Walker 03 December 2011

Enjoyed reading this a great poem, good write.

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Jose Lu 03 December 2011

Judgement byu the world What a truly mirror of this world. Great: D

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 April 2016

Earth is a platform for us to learn. Thanks for sharing.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 29 July 2012

You are right, as Shakespeare said life is a stage and we are actors and actresses are in it. We all play out a role for each other. Personally I found happiness here and now and I do not care what happens if I die. Possibly I will evolve, but only God know what happens there. That is why I live life in perfect harmony and peace with God's laws here and now.

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Andrew Bell 31 May 2012

Great poem Sajna along with your others. Thanks for your comment too :)

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Dead Rose 11 January 2012

Eccentric and excellent poem....10****** Rose)))))))

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Andrew Blakemore 19 December 2011

A most eloquent piece, beautiful poetry.

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