Life And Dreams Poem by Jennifer Birchall

Life And Dreams

Rating: 5.0

Feel stuck in between
Life and dreams
They seem to be mixed together
Leaving me unsure what is real
What if it's all one big dream?
When am I going to wake up?

Tuesday, May 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,life,thoughts
Castellenas John 21 May 2019

I understand this poem Jennifer. A amazing poem.

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Amir Marandi 21 May 2019

A great philosophical question: " What if it's all one big dream? " I hope it is not. I cannot imagine the life energy not being real, but that is just my view. Thanks for sharing.

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Jankovic Zoran 24 May 2019

It's good to be awake sometimes and dream something. It enriches feelings and makes happy. But problems can arise when someone suddenly awakens you from such a dream. Great life poem.

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Muhammad Ali 25 May 2019

We used to pour our dreams on the surface of reality. If reality is not a dream of yours it may be someone else's. Nice poem

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juniper Black 26 May 2019

A terrific job Jen.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2021

Life and dreams seem to be mixed together....Yes Jennifer it is so. It's a fabulous score!

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Jane Campion 15 June 2019

This poem recognises that reality is like a dream and a dream like reality. Many thanks for your kind words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 June 2019

A fabulous poem that articulates the mixed feelings with a series of inquisitions that occur to someone who stands on the border line of life and dream! Extremely well penned...............10

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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2019

Beautiful and insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer.

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Srijita Mondal 30 May 2019

wonderfully expressed poem..really we are stuck in life and dreams..truth is beyond that " Life is false, a dream, So the world and our living, Beyond is divine"

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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