Life Between Deuce And Advantage Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Life Between Deuce And Advantage

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They say life is a game, play it
I started playing,
Stuck between deuce and advantage

They say love is blind
Carry your sticks
I did all seeing and accepting.

They say relations are complicated
Have a big heart to take the blow
My emotional detachment played the trick

They say all values are substantial
Learn to give and take
And here I am stuck
Since to me value is intrinsic with character.

Thursday, June 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

Yes! The ways of life are not always straight. Nice work.

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fountain from the heart has its beautiful shower, interesting thanks for the share

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Susan Williams 16 June 2016

I was extremely taken by the first three lines. Very good write.

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Kelly Kurt 16 June 2016

Very deep thoughts. To me, character is of utmost importance as well

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