Friday, October 2, 2009

Life-Force* Comments

Rating: 5.0

once again the earth
stealthily gnawed at her own margins
entombing gods and humans alike.
freezing all human activity
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indira babbellapati
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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

once again the earth stealthily gnawed at her own margins entombing gods and humans alike. freezing all human activity in its innocent sleep -- a tribute to the tectonic Indonesia though words wont be bringing back lost lives...

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Patrick A. Martin 07 October 2009

What an extrordinary woman you are and your spirit shines through here.

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Pitilosi Mdala 05 October 2009

this is a poem with touching stanzas.

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Sonya Florentino 04 October 2009

it happens again and again...reminding us that we are the same....living in the same world...the same earth...under the same sky.....

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 03 October 2009

ohh yes. this poem grows upon the reader. overwhelming, and emotional. loved it. thank you.

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Saadat Tahir 02 October 2009

vivid and tormenting... the yolk of existence...and the fallibility of creation...very touchingly portrayed... indira ji keep a copy.... they keep happening.... we can only hope for the best... thanx and cheers

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 October 2009

what do we do against nature's wrath...nature's cruel way of reminding us our limits...god be with the all

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Catrina Heart 02 October 2009

what a magnificent creation regarding the scenes of nature's wrath....the damages it brought to the people not only in indonesia or Philippines but all over the globe.............10/10

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Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

A very stunning piece Indira...you have portrayed the horrific scene of devastation, human grief and loss of life an an earthquake site with so much feeeling and sensitivity....10++

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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