Life-Force* Poem by indira babbellapati

Life-Force*

Rating: 5.0


once again the earth
stealthily gnawed at her own margins
entombing gods and humans alike.
freezing all human activity
in its innocent sleep

the buried gods
from the earth below
bear witness to
frozen petrified children
still at their study…
panting parents
under the dead weight
of their young ones…
a just fed infant alive
with a mouthful of milk
in the arms of a mother dead…
a life entrapped for thirteen days
with its breath still intact…

the debris of several limbs
under the rubble of once
a make believe world
and
piles of decaying bodies
impatiently await
a mass burial
as bulldozers devise
bizarre beds
for the dead amid the rubble…

overwhelmed and stunned
the sorrow of the world
erased its boundaries
to find one another
once again.

*(A RE-POST IN SYMPATHY WITH THE QUAKE VICTIMS OF IINDONESIA. this is written after an earthquake in iran a couple of years ago. it's published by postcolonial discourse, an online literary journal from canada)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 02 October 2009

A very stunning piece Indira...you have portrayed the horrific scene of devastation, human grief and loss of life an an earthquake site with so much feeeling and sensitivity....10++

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Catrina Heart 02 October 2009

what a magnificent creation regarding the scenes of nature's wrath....the damages it brought to the people not only in indonesia or Philippines but all over the globe.............10/10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 October 2009

what do we do against nature's wrath...nature's cruel way of reminding us our limits...god be with the all

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Saadat Tahir 02 October 2009

vivid and tormenting... the yolk of existence...and the fallibility of creation...very touchingly portrayed... indira ji keep a copy.... they keep happening.... we can only hope for the best... thanx and cheers

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

once again the earth stealthily gnawed at her own margins entombing gods and humans alike. freezing all human activity in its innocent sleep -- a tribute to the tectonic Indonesia though words wont be bringing back lost lives...

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Patrick A. Martin 07 October 2009

What an extrordinary woman you are and your spirit shines through here.

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Pitilosi Mdala 05 October 2009

this is a poem with touching stanzas.

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Sonya Florentino 04 October 2009

it happens again and again...reminding us that we are the same....living in the same world...the same earth...under the same sky.....

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 03 October 2009

ohh yes. this poem grows upon the reader. overwhelming, and emotional. loved it. thank you.

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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