Life has its meanders and
Pitfalls
How could my love hide
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Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart A profound thought that needs real pondering! Life with its pitfalls, sometimes, has no answer.....A great poem Indira Ma'm of life's strange philosophy.......5 Stars
Your this brilliant poem makes us very emotional. Sun burns but moon reflects calmness. Heart beats to express love and care. Life is precious. Love cannot be hidden at all. This poem is very nicely and interestingly penned...5 stars..
Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart....outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem on love and nature on a metaphorical base is amazingly delineated. Thank you dear madam for your brilliant imagery. Five stars.
A very meaningful write. Thanks for sharing. 'Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart, '...is very nice. Loved it.
Magnificent metophrical play rolling between sun and moon though different live in one space. This is life dispute all pitfalls overcomes and makes a way to live to the fullest. Really enjoyed ma'am. Thank-you so much.
Who can tell moon that Sun is just a fire ball With no heart /// wise expression