Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 24 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

Life Is A Dance In The Rain - Poem by Cristina Teodor

It's raining, it's quiet, only i can hear the rain,
Freshness of air is invading my breath,
The echo of drops falling, the purity of the sky,
It's giving me peace and relieves my pain.

Sky get open and crying,
Its tears are falling down to us,
To caress our faces with its drops,
To embrace our hearts with the mistery of life.

I want to embrace the rain,
And feel the drops falling on my face,
I want the rain to wash away my sorrows,
And let my fears run away.

Don't be afraid of rain, we are just two souls dancing,
Dance with me following the rhithm of rain,
Let the rain to make our love magic,
Let life to flow in its misterious way.

I am listening the rain and enjoy its greatness,
I want to catch every dropp of rain,
I want to dance with you in this magic landscape,
I want to live and relive this moment again and again.

Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can,
Do not waste those exciting moments,
Come with me and let's dance,
Life is a dance in the rain.

Topic(s) of this poem: dance, dancing, life, rain, rain drops


Comments about Life Is A Dance In The Rain by Cristina Teodor

  • Dev Anand (8/3/2016 3:09:00 PM)


    The very title is so very poetic and naturally the whole poem. thank you (Report) Reply

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  • (1/21/2016 10:06:00 AM)


    The Sky Get Open and Cry, Great metaphor. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/17/2016 8:19:00 AM)


    Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can,
    Do not waste those exciting moments,
    Come with me and let's dance,
    Life is a dance in the rain. Such a wonderful and very positive attitude.... marvelous. thank you very much.
    dancing along the nature only to hug all that beauty and drink in till one is satisfied. thank you very much for this poem. tony
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/26/2014 7:30:00 AM)


    Enjoy life, live fully every moment you can,
    Do not waste those exciting moments,
    Come with me and let's dance,
    Life is a dance in the rain.
    Beautifully done poem with real feelings of dance in rain.I enjoyed it a lot.Well expressed.Well done
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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  • Yoseph Lupu (9/30/2012 11:27:00 PM)


    yes, life is a dance in the rain,
    even if it rains in Meine.
    even if it shines
    in a poetry lines!
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  • Unwritten Soul (9/19/2011 12:16:00 PM)


    Just like me, rain is so inspiring...and it pour some magic drops into your mind to write something like this...
    I love this part:
    'I want to embrace the rain,
    And feel the drops falling on my face,
    I want the rain to wash away my sorrows,
    And let my fears run away'...the positivity is greatly bold! keep it up Cristina_Unwritten Soul
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  • (6/1/2011 11:29:00 PM)


    Cristina at her best. 'sky get open........mistery of life', shows the talent. Beautifully penned. drain in the rain. dance not, alone. cherish to partner in your waltz. great write. Narayanan.R (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 22, 2015


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