M. Asim Nehal

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Life’s Recipe - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

You cut my thoughts into pieces,
Wash my dreams like dishes,
Mince ideas with wishes
Test my patience with persistence…

I like the way you serve me with menu
With every opportunity there is an avenue
You make me slog for revenue
Finally reward with retinue

Your toughest dish is meditation
It removes hearts’ hesitation
It takes courage and determination
To acknowledge power of omnipotent

Sometime you in lighter facet
Cook some special dish for occasion
We care every aspect of occupation
You nurture and bless with jubilation

Even when you offer your last supper
You make sure that we make till last puff
Make memorable our last stuff
Before death takes us from this earth

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Life’s Recipe by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/22/2015 9:41:00 AM)

    I will try this recipe......Thanks Man. (Report) Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (11/11/2015 4:29:00 AM)

    I like the way you serve me with menu - good that you are pleased with this crucial process! (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2015 12:33:00 PM)

    I must try it once, seems tasteful, you write differently Asim,10 for it. (Report) Reply

  • (10/23/2015 4:21:00 AM)

    whatever the recipe it must end with a last supper
    Thanks Asim-10++
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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/23/2015 1:29:00 AM)

    Rereading Life's Recipe and enriched again. Wonderful (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/23/2015 12:13:00 AM)

    I am sure the 'she' referred here is Life! Life gives us opportunities, makes us slog for revenue, gives us dreams, makes us ponder over the Power beyond us, gives us moments of disappointments as well as jubilation! Yes, life serves us mixed dishes. A great write touching upon every aspect of human life! (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/23/2015 12:09:00 AM)

    I have been swept away to the seventh sky of great bliss after reading the poem. This lyrical poem has a music and melody that is soothing to the heart. I like the entire poem. A quote:
    It takes courage and determination
    To acknowledge power of omnipotent
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 22, 2015

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