Life's Twist Poem by gina layog

Life's Twist



time fast approaching,
it dawn on me suddenly,
the pendulum of reality,
swinging into the inevitability,
it all comes down to this,
its all coming to a head,
hiding, I cannot afford,
I no longer can avoid,
the endless plausibility,
that no longer holds water,
waiting for a recess in the ground,
would swallow me down, and still the voices around,
this flood that burst through my head,
feel the pain that steeply pulses like lead,
silence the only mark that I exist,
My life that only thing that is consistent,
sacrificial pyre, that proves the twist,
the asylum, I seek to be off the living list.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

My life that only thing that is consistent, sacrificial pyre, that proves the twist, the asylum, I seek to be off the living list.....................Poignant Lines.........

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

life is really exciting is it not? beautiful words..nice sequence amazing poem!

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Barry A. Lanier 25 April 2009

I love the finality.....'seeking to be off the living list', , , , , now that's as Larry would say...if you don' think that's good sumpin' is wrong with ya, , , , , ,

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