Light Filtering Through The Clouds Poem by Beena Jal

Light Filtering Through The Clouds

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through the clouds it drifts
a sea of milk

a ray of hope
a heavenly rope

a mist of joy
a shadow of sky

a path of noor
a flight of hoor

stairs of light
to inconceivable height

a glow in the heart
a joy, for a start

a sight to feel
a light that heal

material of dreams
a magical seam

an angels ride
sun's own pride

a sight that fills
what a magical feeling!

this poem is about the way light passes thru the clouds sometimes.the rays of light filtering thru is quite mesmerizing

PS. noor is 'heavenly light'
hoor is 'fairies'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 31 May 2010

a sight to feel a light that heal material of dreams a magical seam an angels ride sun's own pride a sight that fills what a magical feeling! fantastic.. the ideas you expressed in this poems are multiple but inter related to each other and a visualized effect is found.. quite interesting poem and the way you wrote is soul touching...well done

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Obinna Eruchie 18 July 2009

A light full of love and hope. A creative effort.

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Akram Saqib 09 July 2009

good write beenish keep it on

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Saadat Tahir 07 July 2009

very nice lines and great footnote..... helps to understand the context great flow...easy read...well written] cheers

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Beena Jal

Beena Jal

Rawalpindi, Pakistan
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