People are works of art.
I've known some human sculptures:
Elegant, cold, detached,
Closed in upon themselves.
Others are paintings. These
Need a beholder. Vainly
Pose to be looked upon.
Eye-to-eye dialogue.
Those who are music-like
Want no big audience, playing
Soul-to-soul melody,
Harmony shared with few.
All of them are unique
And - as types - universal,
Yet some just baffle me,
Books in a foreign tongue.
Those extra 4 lines are just what was missing, Julia! ! ! Well done you! ! ! You say I help you? It's mutual, Julia, believe me. Warmest regards, Gina.
An artist who sees the perspectives of a true art, thanks for sharing. Top marks.
Definately an original mind at work. Thank you for sharing. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler
You, dear Julia, are music, pure and simple. Wonderfully observant poem. Scarlett
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the range of analyses here, and the rich language with which you communicate them, Julia. Yep, this kaleidoscope looks like what I know to be human nature. But Julia, I feel you could develop this even further. But it is up to you. Enjoyable reading. With warmth, Gina.