Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 218,772 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Limerick-5-Fist - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Once I met Gattu with some nuts,
He was glutton was living in a hut.
He was taking food in tog like a nut,
In the way by police he was caught,
A fist hit his belly, did he say naught?

Topic(s) of this poem: funny, life

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Nut – a hard-shelled seed
Nut – a crazy person
Naught – nothing
Tog - garment

Comments about Limerick-5-Fist by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:51:00 PM)

    Feedback received
    picture of Rohan *******
    xbeautiful Limerick dear Sir....thank you for sharing...
    16 Sep 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply

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    xA pleasant read as well dear Kumarmani...
    16 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

    picture of Jane Taylor Hardy
    xWonderful limerick!
    17 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

    picture of Elena S(*_*)
    xHahaha nice one! Pleasure to read, thank you for share!
    17 Sep 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply

    picture of Angel mia LOVE
    xAw ;)) xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings my dear friend tfs
    18 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply

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    xThis is brilliant. Thank you for sharing.
    19 Sep 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply

    picture of Sylvia Frances Chan
    xSuperb limerick, subtle worded. Thank you so much for this enjoyment.
    19 Sep 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply
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  • Marie Shine (8/3/2016 4:51:00 AM)

    A funny Limerick as Limericks are supposed to be, dear Kumarmani, but truly it is also a very poignant Limerick in reality because of the cruelty meted out to a poor person who stole a bit of food. In Ireland, the police wear video camera's which capture everything they do, they are unarmed (except for the special branch squad) and they are gentle, kind and helpful to all. There are special places in each city and town where poor people are fed without charge, given fuel for their fire, clothes to wear etc. I enjoyed reading your Limerick very much and I, thank you for sharing it with me today... (Report) Reply

  • Liza Sudina (9/21/2015 2:08:00 PM)

    Unfortunately, police is cruel with poor people here too. they say in USA it is vice versa -they protect citizens not the powers. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/19/2015 12:22:00 AM)

    Amusing indeed, Kumarmani Saab! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/16/2015 10:46:00 AM)

    Ha ha! an amusing limerick. enjoyed it. thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (9/16/2015 10:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful limerick with composition of magical words. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 16, 2015

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