Rinku, Pinku went to Chinku and did hug,
Chinku too did hug them he was on tog,
They were on stroll and they had a dog,
On the way the dog caught a plastic mug,
It sounded dhoo and fled away the dog.
Outstanding limerick yet again...Masterpiece....I agree with Mr Frank's comment.
Awesome limerick I like it's well crafted rhymes, Nice poem.
Stroll, roll, toll! Coil of life with, The soil of love; Able to hug each other. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
picture of Rohan ******* xbeautiful poem Sir.. 12 Oct 2015 by Rohan ******* | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell written and vivid dear Kumarmani. Thank you for sharing. 12 Oct 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x........great write....hugs are wonderful ★ 13 Oct 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xWonderful limerick with a magical theme. Thank you so much for sharing this Limerick-7-On A Stroll. 13 Oct 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Nikunj Sharma xSimple, sweet and stimulating piece of poetry. 14 Oct 2015 by Nikunj Sharma | Reply
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kumar..I'm going to have to start calling you by the pen-name/nick-name of Limerick Man...This is awesome, indeed! Your Stroll was on a Roll that had poetic soul and a dog without his bowl? LoL! ~FjR~