Limerick -A Bird Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Limerick -A Bird

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I saw a wonderful bird in Nagpur
It flew all the way from Berhampur
It can stay near creek
Enough food for a week
It must come to terms with local birds else harmful

Monday, July 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2020

Your bird Limerick is magnificent. You have wonderfully observed the bird. I could not stop myself smiling very large. This is an excellent Limerick! ...10

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 July 2020

It can stay near creek Enough food for a week It must come to terms with local birds else harmful Bird, living, conditions. all came in into this poem a fine poem. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 July 2020

Birds flying there Birds flying here slow wings no sing Falling with drear

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 July 2020

A well crafted poem. Simply wonderful....10++

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