M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,883 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick - Bird Fight - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Husband said to wife: keep your mouth shut
And listen to me first, keep faith and trust
I did not go with that beautiful girl
She followed me all the way and offered pearl
I took that one from her to play spurt

Topic(s) of this poem: fight, love and friendship, satire of social classes

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick - Bird Fight by M. Asim Nehal

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/30/2015 1:12:00 AM)

    I took that one from her to play spurt. Very wise and wonderful sharing done in this context. Important sharing.....10 (Report) Reply

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  • (10/30/2015 12:44:00 AM)

    ho! ho ho that's the way to go
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Sanjukta Nag (10/30/2015 12:40:00 AM)

    Haha very funny one with an enjoyable picture too (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2015 12:05:00 AM)

    It's very enjoyable! Thanks nehal ji... :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015

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