Limerick - A Mouse Reached His Goal Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Limerick - A Mouse Reached His Goal

Rating: 5.0


The mouse was digging hole
While the pussycat was on sole
Before the sunrise
The night silently saw the tide
Pussycat felt fishy, mouse reached goal.

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Version 2 (Contributed by Poet Deluke Muwanigwa)
A mouse was happily digging hole
Pussycat pretending to be a mole
Before the sunrise
There were some cries
cat complaining mouse had reached goal

Thursday, September 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: mouse,nonsense
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Kostag Logas: "A Snake Was Smoking Cigars"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 17 September 2020

A mouse was happily digging hole Pussycat pretending to be a mole Before the sunrise There were some cries cat complaining mouse had reached goal My take. The first and second lines have to rhyme and have max 10 syllables. The third and fouth line should rhyme and contain 5 syllables max and the last line rhymes the first rwo and should max 10 syllables. Thats what i learned here on PH

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 September 2020

Ofcourse mouse reached goal.due to the nonsense of cat. Beautifully composed.

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Michael Jack 17 September 2020

Since ages this game is played and we all enjoy.

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Poetic Sky 17 September 2020

Very well thought witty and wise.

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Sharad Bhatia 17 September 2020

A great expression by a great poet You are really a wizard of words.

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Aren't Limericks fun to write and read.? Thank you for sharing.

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