M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,172 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick – Carrying Burden - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

For how long shall I carry this burden?
Please help me to remove it sudden
Else it will grow bigger than pride
I won’t be able to become anybody’s bride
They enjoyed and left this rotten…….

Topic(s) of this poem: life, lifestyle

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick – Carrying Burden by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (11/3/2015 4:13:00 AM)

    Seeing the kangaroos, this thought always strikes me! I wonder, in the pouch of the kangaroo here, is it some other intruder sitting? Interesting! (Report) Reply

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  • (11/2/2015 11:35:00 AM)

    Ha ha ha..A burden to carry on like we do in life. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/2/2015 10:58:00 AM)

    Wright has created wonderful creatures, you have created wonderful poem. Thank you Asim...10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/2/2015 9:30:00 AM)

    ha! ha1 ha! now that's a real serious problem
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  • Ari Alsio (11/2/2015 8:59:00 AM)

    Please help, my pleasure. Thanks Man (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Skati (11/2/2015 8:34:00 AM)

    Burdens might be a lot of things in life. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (11/2/2015 8:33:00 AM)

    asim, the poem is superb well-wright, i enjoyed reading the poem, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

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