M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,358 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick - The Best - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

We live within boundaries you have set
It is difficult to find food and pass this test
For your pleasure why we suffer
When you enjoy, while we look duffer
Set us free to our natural habitat if you are the best

Topic(s) of this poem: satire, limerick

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick - The Best by M. Asim Nehal

  • Valsa George (12/6/2015 11:42:00 PM)

    Imprisoning animals and birds are against all natural laws. However free they seem in larger confines, still they suffer suffocation.....! They long for their natural habitats! An intelligent write, though not exactly a limerick! (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (12/6/2015 1:39:00 PM)

    Zoos are prisons. Only necessary now because we threaten survival in the wild (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2015 12:26:00 PM)

    We are greedy and in our lust we do what ever we want to, Nice man (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/6/2015 10:28:00 AM)

    Yes I agree with u... We set ourselves boundries.. And it keep us locked from being free...very nice (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/6/2015 3:00:00 AM)

    Wow..so amazing Limerick shared here definitely. All readers will enjoy this with pleasing essence. Very interesting on e this is.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2015

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