M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,267 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Limerick - Poemhunter - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Oh God please send good readers
I want them to give nice feeders
I am hungry for praise
Can’t give anything in return but Okays
To YOU I shall give my breathers

Topic(s) of this poem: life, poets, prayer

Form: Limerick


Comments about Limerick - Poemhunter by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/11/2015 10:34:00 AM)


    Ha ha ha we all want users to read n appreciate.... (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (11/6/2015 5:45:00 AM)


    I too join with your prayer and so do want my share.- - - - Thanks for the lovely feed. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/5/2015 12:09:00 PM)


    Very interesting and full of humour. Graphic makes it a picture of perfection. Thank you, Md. Asim ji. I shall await more of such poems. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/5/2015 5:41:00 AM)


    Hahahaha! This is what a poet's heart wants. Amazing.10++ (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2015 1:05:00 AM)


    I have just been sent!
    thanks Asim-10
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/4/2015 6:21:00 PM)


    A nice gratitude to PH////////////////////////////////10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/4/2015 5:17:00 PM)


    Sending good readers to PH is very interesting task. This is very nice and wise Limerick shared really. Interesting.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/4/2015 1:00:00 PM)


    The otter is an aspiring poet : -) (Report) Reply

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/4/2015 12:03:00 PM)


    A very witty one, looks like God has heard your prayers and is answering through me, the first one to read this limerick.. thanks for sharing, I am highly inspired to read up and understand the nuances of writing a limerick. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 4, 2015



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