Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-2 Poem by Loke Kok yee
Limerick-The Fighter Pilot-2
There was this fighter pilot from long ago
In the sky he would be shouting tally ho
His machine was slow flying around
And he flew too close to the ground
‘twas a shotgun that brought him down I'm told.
This is a beauty except for the fact that people really do terrible things to one another. : ( Bri :)
Very funny! Valsa George is right however on the rhyme scheme. Welcome to the poetry crew!
Thanks for your comment, The error has been corrected after Valsa's comment.
You have the knack of extracting fun even out of a battle field. I agree with Valsa George with regard to the structure. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/17/2024 5:57:45 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Another great limerick! But I wish you to see that the first two and fifth lines rhyme and the third and fourth lines also rhyme...aabba!
Thanks for pointing out Valsa, still on the learning curve.