Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Great Hunter-11 - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This great hunter needed to put meat on the table
Now a zebra he reckoned would nicely fit the label
Thought a dagger will do the trick
The zebra retaliated with a kick
Now he needs a pair of crutches to keep him stable

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick-The Great Hunter-11 by Loke Kok yee

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 2:20:00 AM)

    Ha ha...I will never try that way.....Superb Mr. Loke. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/7/2015 6:56:00 PM)

    Wonderful great hunter is in wise imagery. Very wisely expressed poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/4/2015 10:02:00 PM)

    An interesting limerick! You have created a character who falls into the trap he himself lays! Poo hunter! (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/3/2015 6:09:00 AM)

    Another great hunter with a great idea of killing it with a dagger. Very amusing. Enjoyed it so much.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 3, 2015

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