Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Great Hunter-10 - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This great hunter was out looking for a bear
Was advised by those wiser to watch his rear
He was careless in the woods
Woke a grizzly in a bad mood
Now he moans and groans under intensive care

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick-The Great Hunter-10 by Loke Kok yee

  • Amar Agarwala (3/25/2016 7:45:00 AM)

    Hey Lok, Your limericks are funny and good. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Seema Jayaraman (10/31/2015 12:59:00 PM)

    Enjoyed the Limerick.. Well rhymed and well constructed (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 11:47:00 AM)

    Verily, taking things at ease is to bring ourselves out
    of ease.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/31/2015 9:48:00 AM)

    Superb superb....... you are filled with humour. Loved it.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/31/2015 8:57:00 AM)

    So sad and so funny. Person who doesn't obey the advise sometimes bears trouble. I like the way of presentation dear Loke, thanks for sharing.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/31/2015 8:12:00 AM)

    Some advise can not be ignored otherwise it may lead to such awkward situation....Liked it Mr. Loke....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 31, 2015

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