Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Lioness - Poem by Loke Kok yee

Out in the Serengeti waited a hungry lioness
Spied a porcupine minding his own business
Ah! Dinner is served
Got what she deserved
Quills in her mouth made her rather speechless

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick-The Lioness by Loke Kok yee

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/31/2015 11:52:00 AM)

    Verily, haste is a waste (Report) Reply

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  • Valsa George (10/30/2015 10:20:00 PM)

    We should first think about the consequences of an action before venturing into it! This is a great limerick! Its authenticity is confirmed by the picture it accompanies! A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/30/2015 2:51:00 PM)

    We all know we shouldn't eat certain things but we do anyway: -) (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/30/2015 12:22:00 PM)

    Wrong attempt....hungry or angry on self, must be repenting what she did...........Lovely limerick. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/30/2015 11:33:00 AM)

    Porcupine made the lioness speechless instead of providing dinner. So nicely depicted. Funny and painful. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/30/2015 8:58:00 AM)

    Yeah... this happens when you try to mess with a porcupine! Funny one.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015

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