Loke Kok yee


Limerick-The Snake And The Frog - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This snake was eyeing a frog for his lunch
They struck at each other with a crunch
It was a stand off
A solution is far off
For both of them was unable to munch

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick


Comments about Limerick-The Snake And The Frog by Loke Kok yee

  • Bri Edwards (3/13/2016 3:17:00 PM)


    nice one! how many times did the two have to pose for the camera before they got it right? ?

    love the frog's 'hand' on the snake's 'neck'. the poem ain't too shabby either. but i've come up with a solution.

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    I Had A Hunch


    While walking in a field one day,
    I came upon a horrid display....
    of a reptile-vs-amphibian struggle.
    Each one, with the other, did juggle.

    The snake's jaws had grabbed the frog tight,
    but at the same instant the frog did bite...
    the snake.
    Their jaws held each other in a silly embrace,
    so much that I thought they'd both “lose face”.

    Being a big black bear, I was not only amused,
    but also my big black-bear-brain was transfused ** …
    with a vision of a quick meal. Yes, I had a hunch ….
    that these two poor critters would make me a fine lunch.

    GULP! AHHH!

    ** I beg for poetic license, readers!

    (March 13,2016)

    bri :) :)
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/4/2015 11:07:00 AM)


    I wonder what u do first write limerick or picture first? ? ? Both ways lovely limerick to read....10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/3/2015 11:55:00 PM)


    I don't know where you find these pictures, but you make great limericks from them (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (11/3/2015 6:04:00 AM)


    both of them was unable to munch..... you are too good in making limericks out of this pictures. Loved it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 3, 2015



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