Limerick- Try Later Poem by Indira Renganathan

Limerick- Try Later



'God, crying I tell you everything
And telling you everything crying
What to do to feel free? '
'Line's on a busy spree'
Try later'said a voice from God's wing

Wednesday, April 3, 2019
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2019

Beautiful Limeric with fun. Interesting to read. Third and fourth lines should be rhymed each other. Thank you dear madam for sharing here.

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