Limit Of Trust Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Limit Of Trust

Rating: 5.0


No more blood and no more room,
Time! Throw your groping spears,
Heal a few with the soft fingers
Wounds given by the passing years,
Are enough and enough is enough,
The earth seems a pneumatic trough,

Stop now collecting human sighs,
An apathetic inverted jar, The Sky!
Humble earth honors your writ,
Neither we challenge nor we deny,
But the over filled jar may now burst,
It's now exceeding the limit of trust.

Thursday, September 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 October 2016

Very well said, Indeed now over filled jar is about to burst, It has now exceeded the limit of trust......So well written poem...enough is enough, finally peace has to return.10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 October 2016

With more and more violence on this earth, no wonder, one begins to lose trust! The sighs become loud and unbearable. Wish all human beings would realise the path of 'Ahimsa' or Non-violence like Mahatma Gandhi did. Akhtar Sahab, an intense and thoughtful poem. A full score, Sir!

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Khalid Saifullah 23 September 2016

A thoughtful poem.....................................

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