Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 99,616 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Limerick Of The Dry Fruits - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Fruits of love are now changing their shapes,
the raisins you see were nice juicy grapes,
food value and sweetness on the higher side,
tasteful in the winter for a casual tide,
still fresh enough for the nature's rapes!

Topic(s) of this poem: rape


Comments about Limerick Of The Dry Fruits by Akhtar Jawad

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/30/2015 5:27:00 PM)


    Fruits of love are changing their shapes and value of food and sweetness are tasteful with amazing imagination shared here. Marvelous expression is shared with new wings of mind to fly in literary sky. Interesting and nice.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/30/2015 12:28:00 PM)


    Juicy fruits once now have become dry....So is the life, satire and witty part is fantastic with philosophical undertone. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/30/2015 1:22:00 AM)


    A nicely witty limerick, Akhtar. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015



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