Lingering Beauty Of A Tiny Dew Drop Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Lingering Beauty Of A Tiny Dew Drop

Rating: 5.0


A tiny dew drop
Lives as long as it holds on
To a hanging leaf,
To a blade of grass,
To a sheaf of paddy,
Or sits on a flower petal,
And what a beauty it beholds
To the gazing eyes of an onlooker!

But alas! As it trickles down,
It meets the earth and dies.
A life so short lived,
Yet how long lasting an image
It leaves behind!
The beauty lingers in the eyes forever!


Dhaka
21 July 2018
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Saturday, July 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Nobel laureate poet Rabindranath Tagore once wrote " Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf." ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 02 August 2018

Beautiful quote in the Poet's Note, but I find your poem equally beautiful in its image of that tiny drop of dew. Your image is lingering in my mind and that is a true test of a poem. 10++++++++++++

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2018

A beautifully crafted write. ++10- - - - - - - - -

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2018

Thank you, @Robert Murray Smith. I am much obliged.

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Hazel Durham 22 July 2018

A dew drop hangs in a graceful and courageous way as it hangs on to a leaf creating a sparkle on a dull day! Beautiful write!

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2018

Yes, 'courageous' is another right attribute of a tiny dew drop that I missed, but you've rightly mentioned. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on my poem, @Hazel Durham.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

Thanks a lot for your comment, dear poet EKL.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

@Susan Williams, You are very kind! I am greatly inspired by your generous rating of the poem and your appreciative comment. Am also glad to note that you had a look at the 'Poet's Notes' and appreciated that too. Few readers take notice of such details.

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

@S.zaynab Kamoonpuri, I am glad to know that both you and your mom love and admire dew drops.I am greatly inspired by the high praise you showeed on my poem. Thank you so very much!

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Khairul Ahsan 31 August 2020

@Rose Marie Juan-austin, Thank you so much for reading my poem and so correctly interpreting my humble wok! I am greatly honored by your generous rating of the poem and for picking it up for your 'MyPoemList'. I have just read and commented on your beautiful poem 'Crescent Moon'.

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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2020

@Mahtab Bangalee, Thanks for quoting from the poem and appreciating the poem so much. Glad to have your inspiring comment.

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